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Alright, before you decide you hate me let me explain.
I have this character named Kosa [Who I really need to make a current pic of] who is Nala and Scar's daughter and I didn't exactly see her as wanted by Nala. Aka the name Kosa which means 'mistake.' So I got to thinking of how it all would happen. I can see Nala not consenting to being with Scar which is why she is so distant from Kosa who reminds her of him.
Anyways this also goes along with the "What if" contest over at
What if Scar found Nala before she could get away from the Pridelands to find help?
Nala finally felt relief as she reached the edge of the Pridelands. She was going to make it, she was finally escaping this hellish place. A determination took over here as she increased her speed, eyes faced ahead, towards freedom, towards hope.
Suddenly she hit the ground, air knocked out of her as a large weight held her down.
"Where do you think you're going?" A cruel voice cooed.
Scar glowered down at the young lioness who was at a loss for words. Too terrified to even breathe.
The dark lion smirked down at her, eyes a glow in excitement as his claws pressed down into her.
"You'll never cross me again, kitten."
Commission Info here :[link]
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© 2011 - 2024 nocks
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Overall Vision
Originality Technique ImpactWell nocks, I gotta say.
There's not really much to Critique on. Everythign looks ver nice. The Shading is a bit too much, but Excellent none-the-less. If I were being nitpicky though, which, I am <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/w/e/w…" alt="
" title="werebereus"/> it seems to be a habit of mine, I'd like to direct you attention Nala's paws and Scar's muzzle.Nala's Paws:
I think most will agree they're too small. Or maybe it's her head that's too big? Actually, looking at it now, I think that might be it...
Scar's Muzzle:
Looks weird and an bit to blocked like Mufasa. Scar's muzzle is thin and narrow, also I think the bottom part of his muzzle is a bit to big for the rest of his face.
Simply put: If anything your artwork needs work on, it's Proportions.